Forum Contest [December] - Advent 1

His heart dropped..he felt a cold shiver down his spine adrenaline was coursing through his veins as he saw hideous beast approaching him.

 

Suddenly, Sargon the terrible, who was clearly forgotten, came to the prince's rescue and killed the Kraken in one mighty swing.

 

"Is he on my side?" Just as the prince was lost in his thoughts Sargon the Terrible stood beside the sword of Achilles glaring right back at him, ready for battle "Behold mighty prince!"

 

Sargon the Terrible tried to pull the Sword of Achilles with all his might but it wouldn't budge.

 

Then the hero came to try his luck, he did few warm-up moves blew all the air from his lunges and spitted on his hands before he took the swords handle.

 

In response to Duncan's question as to whether the Winter Solistice Festival would take place as usual in Grimford, Father Priscus slowly nodded. He was calm as ussual but he was highly impressed by what he saw: it was a "falling star", which looked like his father used to tell him...

 

the kraken stood up bold against this little foe, this little human that is now charging toward him with a rusty blade

 

At that moment mysterious ghost showed up...

 

The Prince was suddenly rooted to the spot by the coiling tendrils of an entanglement spell, as Sargon hissed in his ear "Caught like a fly in a spider web, you young fool"

 

He desperately needed new plan now.

 

Just as he thought that all was lost, an explosion was heard and with it marched in a small, stout man with a peculiar object in his hands.

 

The small, stout man turned to be a dwarf with a bomb which proved to not much use against Sargon.

 

However, the bomb's explosion was enough to destroy a few tendrils and provide enough distraction for the prince to pull out the sword and stab Sargon right in the stomach.

 

Even though Father was emotionally strong person, he, for the first time in his life, felt down on his knees and and began to cry...

 

And I wonder what the previous post has anything to do with the current story

 

well, it was said that we're allowed to add one new sentence per day and I wrote first sentence yesterday

 

Please read carefully, you aren't doing the right instructions.

 

could you tell me what am i doing wrong?

 

You have to continue where the previous poster left the story, not start from the beginning

Upon realizing its not the time to waste in celebration, the prince took off to the next hurdle - the ferryman - in the Land of the dead, with his loyal friend Des the Dwarf.

 

ok thank you guys, sorry for doing it not right